hang in thereper·se·ver·ance

noun \ˌpər-sə-ˈvir-ən(t)s\ First known use: 14th century

:The quality that allows someone to continue trying to do something even though it is difficult : Continued effort to do or achieve something despite opposition : Steady persistence in a course of action

“What is written without effort is in general read without pleasure.” Samuel Johnson, Johnsonian Miscellanies, Vol 2.

About a year and a half ago, a friend and successful mystery writer told me, “Writing a novel takes persistence. And when you think you’re done, you’re probably not.”

That wasn’t what I wanted to hear at the time. But she was right. And as I slog my way through the fourth major revision of my manuscript, I tell myself that I may not be at the end of the process yet, but I am drilling down toward the goal, and that’s what counts.

One source of encouragement is the experience of others. Most successful writers will admit to a flood of rejection letters. Some stories are legendary. Here’s a sampling:

  • Agatha Christie endured five years of rejection before publishing The Mysterious Affair at Styles, featuring the little Belgian detective, Hercule Poirot.
  • C. S. Lewis, author of The Narnia Chronicles, received over 800 rejections before he published a single piece of writing.
  • William Faulkner received this rejection letter: “If the book had a plot and structure, we might suggest shortening and revisions, but it is so diffuse that I don’t think this would be of any use.”
  • J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter & The Sorcerer’s Stone was rejected repeatedly until the eight-year-old daughter of an editor demanded to read the rest of the book.
  • Dr. Seuss was told about his first book, And To Think That I Saw It on Mulberry Street, “too different from other juveniles on the market to warrant its selling.”
  • Louisa May Alcott was told to stick to teaching.
  • Madeleine L’Engel‘s classic A Wrinkle in Time was turned down 26 times before it was published.
  • George Orwell was told of Animal Farm, “It is impossible to sell animal stories in the USA.”
  • Louise Penny, author of the Gamache mystery series set in Canada (and one of my favorite mystery writers), says her first mystery Still Life was turned down more times than she was willing to admit, even to her agent.

Last year more than 400,000 people took part in National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWrMo). The annual event challenges participants to write 50,000 words of a new novel during the month of November. Every year hundreds of thousands of novels are begun. A much smaller number are completed. But are they finished? What does it mean to be finished? What does it take?

Taking a novel from the first word to publishable form takes many things: talent, time, effort, a little bit of luck, friends, the ability to receive and profit from criticism, endless revisions, more criticism, more revisions.

And perseverance.


What I Wish I Had Known, Part V: Lucy Burdette

Roberta IsleibThis week I am pleased to introduce you to Lucy Burdette, author of twelve mysteries, eight written as Roberta Isleib. Lucy Burdette is the penname for New Jersey born clinical psychologist Roberta Isleib, an Agatha-, Anthony-, and Macavity-award nominee. She is past-president of Sisters in Crime, International, as well as her local New England chapter.  

topped-chef-309x500Lucy’s most recent mystery series stars Key West food critic Hayley Snow. Topped Chef, the third book in the series, came out in May. The fourth, Murder with Ganache,Roberta Isleib Murder with Ganache hits bookshelves in early February, but can be pre-ordered now [click on link].  

I had the privilege of meeting Lucy Burdette this past September at Seascape Writers’ Retreat—an annual writing workshop in Chester, Connecticut, sponsored by Lucy and pals Hallie Ephron and Hank Phillippi Ryan. The week-end was practical, eye-opening, encouraging–and loads of fun.

Recently I asked Lucy to share the most important advice she would give to aspiring writers, like me. This is what she said: 

When Connie first invited me to share the best advice I had on writing, I thought it would be easy. I imagined a million ways to start—with fifteen years writing fiction and almost twelve books published, shouldn’t I be a font of information?  

How about this: Read a lot, but make sure you include books in the genre in which you’re writing? For each genre, the readers have expectations. For amateur sleuth mysteries like the ones I write, some of the necessary conventions include playing fair with clues, avoiding the trap of the female in jeopardy, not withholding necessary information from the reader, not allowing a gimmick to take the place of a good story… 

But then I thought my words would be better focused on making sure you take time away from writing to live life. Because life feeds fiction, especially after a writer has mined her personal business for the first novel. Travel, exercise, cook, eat, spend time with friends and family…and listen to the people around you, thinking all the while: what if? 

But wait, maybe it’s most important to warn new writers about the importance of friends. Writing and publishing are both difficult, not for the faint-hearted. You’ll need friends who don’t roll their eyes when you talk about your characters as if they were your kids. And friends who can buck you up when you get a rough critique or bad news. And friends who might cook for you or lend you a quiet room when you’re on a crushing deadline. And friends to be happy for your success and come to your booksigning… 

But in the end I decided the best advice is this: Never rush to send your work out. With agents and editors and contests only a mouse click away, it’s easy to hit send before the work is the best it can be. Rewriting is a writer’s best friend—whether a newbie or an old hand. Put the precious words in a drawer, cyber or real, and let them simmer. Get feedback from trusted sources, rewrite again.

Lucy can be found online in “way too many places” (her words): Facebook, Pinterest, Twitter, Mystery Lovers Kitchen, and Jungle Red Writers. Plus her own websites, as Lucy Burdette and Roberta Isleib.  

Pre-order Murder With Ganache: 

Find Lucy at: [killer recipes!]

Blogs and Bum Glue

    Alice in Wonderland “She generally gave herself very good advice,” Lewis Carroll said of Alice in Wonderland, “though she very seldom followed it.” 

     The best advice I gave myself when I began the long, winding, and shockingly potholed road to publication three years ago was to seek the advice of successful writers. And I found plenty of it. Published writers are, for the most part, a generous lot. Perhaps they remember and are grateful for those who helped them along the way.  

     The problem with advice, however, is that it is often contradictory. Does one use italics for interior speech, for example, or is that frowned upon today? Will beginning with a prologue get you immediately shunted into the sidings? Which “point of view” is best for a first novel—first person, third person, or multiple? Is the “omniscient narrator” passé? Is tension necessary on every page or should you give the reader time to regroup? Are critique groups helpful or are they akin to writing a novel by committee?  What haunts me are the questions I haven’t thought of yet.

     Chapter One ImageSigh. Sometimes it’s a blessing to be naïve.  I began—with a story in my head and no clue how to tell it effectively. One piece of advice has been essential: Keep on keeping on. Persevere. Never give up. Develop what mystery writer Elizabeth George calls “bum glue.” 

     Recently, following a link on Twitter, I found a fascinating blog on the craft of writing. The most amazing part is that the blogger—Ninie Hammon—is married to an old friend.  I knew that Ninie (pronounced “9e” – and yes, that’s her real name) was a successful writer of suspense novels, but I had no idea she had a blog. Or that it would be so entertaining.  

   Ninie Hammon (2)  I just finished reading her wonderful series entitled, “Ten Ways to Create Unforgettable Characters” (Aug 25th through Nov 25th of this year). Check out Ninie’s blog at

     Ninie knows what she’s talking about. She’s an unforgettable character herself.

What I Wish I Had Known, Part IV: G. M. Malliet


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G. M. Malliet 


This week I have the privilege of introducing you to award-winning mystery writer G. M. MALLIET, whose books, written in the tradition of Agatha Christie, are set in the U.K. 

Malliet’s first mystery, Death of a Cozy Writer, was awarded the prestigious Malice Domestic Grant, followed by the Agatha Award for Best First Novel.  

Her current series, set in the fictional English village of Nether Monkslip (don’t you love that name?), features Max Tudor–Anglican priest,  former MI5-agent, and village heartthrob. The third book in the series, Pagan Spring, hit the bookstores just this month. Life is good for Vicar Max Tudor.PaganSpring Reveling in his new-found personal happiness with Awena Owen, his life holds no greater challenge than writing his Easter sermon. But when murder invades his idyllic village of Nether Monkslip, Tudor’s MI5 training kicks in. But can he restore peace to the village and still manage to finish his sermon? 

When I asked her what she wishes she had known starting out as a writer, Ms. Malliet said: “I don’t feel I made any huge mistakes along the way to publication, other than occasionally losing faith and belief in myself that I would get published one day. I knew I had a story I liked (Death of a Cozy Writer) and I hoped that one day someone besides me would see some benefit to themselves in representing or publishing my work. There were days when the sight of yet another rejection letter in the mail when I came home exhausted from work pretty much broke my heart. It’s funny but now that I write full time, I have days when I am tired, but I never experience the soul-destroying drain I felt working a “money job” (writing advertising copy). So my advice to new writers has to be the old adage about never quitting. I wanted to quit a hundred times. I would swear I was going to pack it in. But I didn’t want to reach the end of a long life knowing I’d never done what I most wanted to do. That was the only prospect I could not face–somehow I felt I’d sacrificed too much already to just give up trying.”

Malliet’s many fans (myself included) are so glad she persevered! If you love maps as I do, check out the wonderful interactive map of Nether Monkslip at And look for Pagan Spring at your favorite bookstore or on Amazon.

Amanda Flower’s Advice for New Mystery Writers

          Amanda Flower photoThis week I have the pleasure of introducing you to a wonderful mystery writer, Amanda Flower (yes, that’s her real name), who offers readers “witty suspense with hope.”

Amanda started her writing career in elementary school when she read a story she’d written to her sixth grade class and had them in stitches with her description of being stuck on the top of a Ferris wheel. At that moment she knew she’d found her calling of making people laugh with her words. Her debut mystery, Maid of Murder, was an Agatha Award Nominee for Best First Novel.

In addition to her work as an academic librarian for a small college near Cleveland, Amanda juggles three series, including one written under the name of Isabella Allen.          

When I asked Amanda how she would advise those hoping to break into the competitive field of mystery writing, she said this: “The number one thing a new mystery writer needs to know are mysteries. You have to know the genre that you want to write. I’ve been a mystery fan since I was a child and can’t tell you how many mystery novels I have read. I’ve read them for enjoyment, but along the way, I learned the norms and elements that are found in all mysteries. I think this made it easier for me to craft a mystery plot of my own. I know there are certain plot points I need to reach as the author. I’m not saying you can’t break with convention when you write mystery; many bestselling mystery authors have with great success. However, the cliché is true: you have to know the rules before you can break them. So visit your local library, load up on all the mysteries you can carry, and start reading!”

Amanda’s latest mystery, A Plain Scandal, is available now. Three new books, coming out in September, are available for preorder:

APlainDisappearanceA Plain Disappearance (Book Three in the Appleseed Creek Mystery series)

Murder Plain and Simple by Isabella Allen (first in the new Amish Quilt MurderPlainandSimpleShop series)

AndiUnexpectedAndi Unexpected (a mystery for children, ages 8 to 12).

Amanda’s books are available at many outlets, including Amazon, B&N, and Lifeway. Look for Amanda on her website: and on Twitter @aflowerwriter. Follow her on Facebook, Goodreads, and Pinterest.

Thanks, Amanda! Keep writing!             .                                                                                  

Duffy Brown’s “Never Give Up” Game Plan to Getting Published

WritingAll writers, especially first-time writers, struggle mightily with self-doubt. Believe me, I know. Even though, so far, I’ve stuck a mere toe in the turbulent waters of submission and rejection, I have experienced the wild mood swings many authors feel regarding their own work. Sometimes I think my manuscript is pretty darn good. Other times (maybe even later that same day) I think it’s hopelessly awful.  

Have you ever felt like giving up on writing? Successful author Duffy Brown Duffy Brown printable(Dianne Castell) knows the feeling. Her success has come by good writing and perseverance. 

Duffy began her writing career in the romance genre. As a USA Today bestselling author, she wrote for Kensington and Harlequin, won a Romantic Times Reviewers’ Choice Award, a HOLT-Medallion Award, was featured on the cover of Romantic Times Magazine, and was included in Rhapsody Book Club, Doubleday Book Club, and the Waldenbooks Bestseller list.

Then DufKiller in Crinolines printable1fy turned to writing cozy mysteries for Berkeley Prime Crime. Good decision. Her mystery, Iced Chiffon, first in the Consignment Shop series, was nominated for an Agatha Award (Best First Novel). The tale, set in Savannah, features an engaging heroine, a satisfyingly twisty plot, and pots of southern charm. The second book in the series, Killer in Crinolines, is now out (May 2013). Check out Duffy’s web site:, and look for her books on Amazon. Thanks, Duffy for graciously sharing  your encouragement and much-needed advice for unpublished authors.

Duffy Brown’s “Never Give Up” Game Plan To Getting Published 

Self-publishing is a great way to get your work out there, no doubt about it, but it’s not for everyone. With all the articles out there on self-pub this is my two cents on getting published with a traditional publishing house. 

The best way to guarantee you’ll never get published is to not send out your work…and keep sending it out and keep sending it out. I am amazed how many writers write their story and have no idea where they are going to submit it. You need to write something that is salable, something the publisher wants. You need to do homework, see which publishers publish the sort of stories you want to write then send them your work. It’ll never get published sitting in the drawer. 

Okay, I know this is a lot easier in theory than practice because there’s a chance you’ll get the much dreaded rejection letter and that really hurts.  

Because this reject cycle totally sucks and really got me down when I was breaking into the writing scene, I finally learned a little trick to survive…have two projects “out” at all times. This way if one house rejected my work I still have hope. Hope really counts! Often I had two different projects out at the same time.  

Always submit to more than one publisher at a time. Multi-submissions are the only way to survive in a business where waiting a year for a reply is commonplace.  

But watch out! Just don’t send your cherished work off to any editor at a publishing house because the chances are good that all your future submissions will go to that editor no matter which editor you address your work to. Yes, publishing houses keep track of who submits and what they submit. This keeps you from resubmitting the same material to different editors at the same house. So, if you choose a bad editor you are screwed because she/he will keep getting your work!  

Now the question is, how to find the “right” editor? Ask around. Find online writer chats, loops, blogs and ask which editor at a publishing house likes the sort of thing you’re writing.  

Another thing about those reject letters, not all are bad even if they feel that way. Here’s the difference. Most are form letters. But sometimes an editor adds a personal line or two about your work like…I hate this story except for the setting. Nice setting. Wow, now this is a good rejection letter and you’ve hit gold because this editor is interested in you. He/she wouldn’t have taken time to write to you if not truly interested in your work. On the other hand, if you submit two projects to an editor and keep getting the form reject letter, this editor is not into you. Submit elsewhere. 

Using this more than one project out method of getting published really worked for me in that it kept my spirits up. This is a big part of getting published. It’s way too easy to start doubting your work and yourself, and you should know this reject thing happens even after you’re published. Not all your projects are going to get snapped up. Always have two ideas cooking so if one idea gets shot down by your editor you can always say, “okay, you don’t like that but what about this.” 

Better yet, once published, always try to be published at two houses. That way if you get killed at one house, the other is your safety net. 

These are my survival tricks. What are yours? How do you keep from just throwing in the towel…or computer…and giving up? Talk to your friends? Cry? Have a whine party with wine? Let me know and I’ll draw two names from the replies and send you Killer in Crinoline tote bags.  

Hugs and happy submitting, Duffy Brown

Killer In Crinolines from Berkley Prime Crime

Advice for New Writers from Author Daryl Wood Gerber aka Avery Aames

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Will Rogers said, “A man learns in two ways, one by reading, and the other by association with smarter people.”   

When I started planning my first mystery novel three years ago, I should have taken more time to read about the craft of writing first. I would have avoided a ton of mistakes. But one thing I did right was to seek the advice of smarter people and to learn from their experience.  

Avery Aames (Daryl Gerber)Today I have the privilege of featuring Daryl Wood Gerber aka Avery Aames. As AVERY AAMES, she pens the Agatha Award-winning, nationally bestselling CHEESE SHOP MYSTERY series. As DARYL WOOD GERBER, she writes A COOKBOOK NOOK MYSTERY series. FINAL SENTENCE, the first book in the Cookbook Nook series, debuts on July 2 (Berkley Prime Crime, a division of Penguin Books). Avery Aames Final SentenceThe story features Jenna Hart, a former advertising executive, who leaves the corporate world to help her aunt open a culinary bookshop and cafe. Back with her family in Crystal Cove, California, Jenna seems to have all the right ingredients for a fresh start—until someone adds a dash of murder.  

Daryl’s short stories have been nominated for the Agatha, Anthony, and other awards. As an actress, Daryl has appeared in “Murder, She Wrote” and more. In additional to juggling two mystery series, Daryl also takes time to encourage new writers through the Guppies group of Sisters In Crime. Recently I asked her some questions about her own experience as a mystery writer.  

Q: What is the one thing you wish you had known starting out?

 How long it was going to take. Truly. And how much better prepared I should have been for the business side. I had no idea there would be so much promotion involved. Facebook, Twitter, a website that needs to be constantly updated. I would have liked a shelf filled with how to write books, and I would like to have read them all, front to cover. Check out Chris Roerden’s book, Don’t Murder Your Mystery, and Hallie Ephron’s The Everything Guide to Writing Your First Novel. I wish I’d been part of a critique group from the beginning so I’d had feedback on my writing. 

Q: What is the most important thing you learned writing and publishing your first book?  

How much I have to balance my time with writing, doing PR, and having a life. I need to be very disciplined to get it all done. 

Q: What is the biggest mistake you made? 

My biggest mistake was sending out material before it was ready. As I wrote above, I should have been in a critique group long before I finally found one. I should have been taking more classes and really polishing my prose. I should have truly understood the hero’s journey. 

Q: What advice would you give to emerging writers? 

  • Read within your genre and without. See what’s selling. Get a list of agents and see what they are selling. Submit to agents who sell your kind of book. Don’t waste your time submitting to agents who do not sell your style.  
  • Go to conferences, if you can afford to, where writers meet agents. Learn how to pitch your book. I have made a YouTube video called The Elevator Pitch [Note: there are a few with that title; this is the one with me in a pink jacket, elevator doors open…]. Take a look. It shows you the bad way and the good way to pitch. Hone your pitch to 30 seconds…with a smile and energy.  
  • Don’t get discouraged with rejection. It happens to all of us. Take in the comments, if they are reasonable, and allow your work to grow. Learn. Listen. 
  • Persevere. Don’t give up. If you give up before you are published, you will never be published. It’s that simple. Believe you can. But realize it might not happen with your first or even your second book.

You can visit Daryl & Avery at and (where you can sign up for her newsletter to learn about upcoming events and contests). Check out her fabulous recipes on her blog And friend her on Facebook.